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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was...terrible!
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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting to see where you're going with this... I know where my mind is taking me. In Cannon, when Harry had such a hard time finding a happy enough memory, why didn't Lupin help him make a happy memory of love a pleasure... But I'll wait and see what you come up with.
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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I still think this chapter was terrible but I have a better understanding that it's a parody now that I've had time to fully read the summary. True I laughed my ass off when Harry shrank his dick but you should have made the chapter longer.
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January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like the idea of it and would like to see what happens next