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for The Underling

by AlphazSlut

person Nina
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I hope you continue. It's been a long time since I've read a period piece with the main characters as king, please update :-)
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well i like this so far and would really love to see where you go with it....please i have add it to my fav's so please update soon.
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why'd you stop? this is so good! I love the plot! I can not wait to read more! not only does the plot seem sold but your writing flows so smoothly, if you use a beta please tell er that she is amazing! If not then I hold your writing in that much more regard! please let me know when you update this! adames.leticia@gmail.com
person Jasmine
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love this tory so far, you could take this so far and I really hope that you update soon. I love that 'Harry' has that fiery spirit. Please do update and keep going with this story.
person Lucylein
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love stories who play in previous times and this story has a promising start. Please continue!

Please ignore grammar errors, I'm from Germany and I love to read English stories but hate to write English comments :)
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The plot so far is a little bit of clich
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the first chapter, I like the good au stories! Please write more soon!!
person miss malfoy
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it, plz keep updating I hate it when people don't finish a good story
person Talltree-san
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far. Can't wait for the next chappie :D!
person Sarah
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very cool story, and I cant wait to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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