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for The Second Coming of Severus Snape

by Ataraxia

schedule August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love all of your stories, there awesome because even though they are oneshots they have slight plot humour AND you manage to include smut. which is more than what i can say to other authors that write beggining with smut and ending with smut. not that i mind. when i'm alone at night ( lol ) i like to read some short smut oneshots but lately i've become more interested into stories with something OTHER than the norm. which is exactly why i love your stories. >.< go you!
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow....what can I say...utterly brilliant. You really do have a way with words and I wish that I had a fraction of your talent . Remus and Fred absolutely hilarious! Just the right amount of comic relief ;) Your portrayal of Severus was incredible accurate , getting his caused wit down to a tea ....at the risk off repeating myself wow wow wow... Hats off to you!
Suzie
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, meant to say Severus' caustic wit ..... Bloody predictive texts. Lol. ;
Ps please write a sequel ( begs on hands and knees... Puppy eyed, bottom lip trembling! Please)
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!! please write a sequel!!!!! *squeals like a fangirl*
person Leania07
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. GOD!! That was not only clever (for the title) but absolutely hysterical! I had to bury my face in a pillow to keep from laughing so loud to wake my family. Oh I wonder how you came up with this idea, and I am curious to know what happens next, even though you posted that this was complete. Gah, I'm still chuckling and can't get the goofy grin off my face.
<3 for the laughs!

Leania
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* that was really funny

thanks for sharing :)
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that. was. BRILLIANT.

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