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Hey. I love this story, but could I make a suggestion? During the last chapter, the speech changed between Harry and Draco. It turned from casual to 'You know naught of what you speak.' I love where the story is going, but that type of speech just really throws the whole thing out of whack. It's inconsistent with the, I guess you could call it, jargon of the rest of the story. I love this story, so please don't take this as my being harsh. I just wanted to help you out with it. Love it!

boooooo for youthful misunderstandings but at least it's mostly cleared up now.

You've done such a wonderful job of showing how painful it is for Harry. He cherishes the chance he has to be close to Draco even if it is only in friendship and tries so hard to keep that connection. And then he's so hurt and confused when Draco is pulling away from him. And it is so clear how devastated he feels... how he can't take his hand away from his face and how he detroys things in his room... I just love every word of this story.

Can't wait for more!

amazing. I was a little thrown off by the big time jump of seven years but it actually seemed to move smoothly. I love the way its written kind of like you are being told the story by harry or you are reading his diary or something . Its like your are in his head. lovely. write more :)

I really really like this. Even though a lot of it is Harry's own thoughts, you've done a great job of moving the story along through his own emotional development and the times he interacts with others shows how lonely he feels. I really liked his visit with Snape... the was funny how Snape responded. This just has such a mellow feel to it... the story just sucks me in and makes me want to just sit here and watch it slowly unfold.

And how Draco and Harry respond to each other is sweet. It's went through so many emotions... awareness, interest, bugging each other, waiting for each other... I just like everything about it.

Oh no so much time has passed. Why didn't Harry ever try to use his friendship with Snape to find Draco and confess his feelings for him? Even now why must he be a coward instead of fighting for what he wants? Again Draco has to come to Harry I'm mean Draco would have known that the Chosen one decided to work at Hogwarts. I can't wait to read more!

about #3...

...and all I can say is, this story is 'squeeeeeal!' worthy. :-)

I loved it and I can't wait for more! I feel bad for Malfory though; his having to wait on Harry to know what he wants. Didn't Draco just mean by saying Harry was his romantically isn't it just a romantic way of showing someone that you want them soley in their life alone and don't want to share them. Where did Malfoy go and why? What will Harry do to get Draco back in his life? I can't wait to find out!

I like it so far, can't wait for more :).