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.....wow this is very interesting. Im glad I took the chance to stop and read it actually. I cant wait to see what happens in the morning and later on in this story. I hope this gets updated soon :) please keep up the good work. This gets two thumbs up from me :D

You did it!! Thank you, thank you! This was such a fantastic beginning. Completely captured the essence of Benefactor but made the twists and changes made it its own unique story. I love the little details you've put in here: potion in the shampoo, Narcissa realizing her own weakness and proclivities, her taking a potion to make Draco a boy. And I loved how Hermione's intelligence actually appealed to Narcissa. Can't wait to see what you do with this. Thank you! :)