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for The Last Requirement

by KawaiiHimeCeres

person Seraphin
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I didnt expect so fast response. Two chapters, nice :D. I wonder what could be Harrys condition. I like a overprotective Draco, however it is just classic girly fantasy abot man being like that, it still appeals in stories :P :D. Ehm, abot forums, neither I am member and also I don t write in English so well, reading is fine and short reviews as well, but meaningfull conversation is quite impossible. Timewise, I spend more time writing this like reading two chapters. I can t structure sentes just right, sometimes they come up quite rude without meaning to or with different meaning because I am language anti talent about spelling, grammer and niceties (how should be something said properly). I hope you wouldn t mind, that I will pass. Still like your forum idea.
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is everyone crazy? Even Ron noticed the green tint. Harry shouldn't be flying!!!
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Draco sounding gay when he keeps telling everyone he is not gay... yeah keep telling yourself that draco lol
person Jan
schedule July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^
person Seraphin
schedule July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for discussion thread, but I am not official member of this site and don t use forums. Still, love your story. Would you continue? or your Muse got holidays? :D
person ChaosLady
schedule July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I expected Ron's reaction to be more explosive. That was too short for someone who hadn't updated in awhile. Good update.
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And they have no memory? Weird! How do you bond and not mean to?
schedule June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. ch. 5 is cool. Love how the two are kinda getting along.
person Seraphin
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cat is out of its bag :D :D :D, nice, thanks for update, waiting for another chapter. I like your writing style, it sounds funny and not at same time.
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nothing can ever run straight for these boys can it. :P

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