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for Broken Dreams

by onecelestialbeing

person anyesha
schedule May 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please need the next chapter dying to see what do they do next morning
person anyesha
schedule May 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you r bloody brilliant cant wait for more please write sooooooooooooon ........dude i am in love with this story..........
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
damn talk about SEXY!!!
this long chapter was filled with so much goodness that I seriously want Snape now more than ever!
Can i have him?
please, Please, PLEASE!!!!
can't wait to read your next chapter
btw I'm glad they finally got intamite with each other :D
person bayand
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow definetly worth the wait
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, um... wow! That was... dayum!!! I mean, ahem, that was HOT, sweet, loving, tender, real and PERFECT. Thank you!! HG4eva
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! that was so hot! you made the wait completely worth it! Cheers!
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was hawt. I hope more is to come soon.
person JanisJ
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you SO MUCH for writing so realistically (and with good style and grammar, etc)!! I've been getting sick of having a fanfic's girl's first time being awesome and pain-free-- or at least being fine with it and not calling a postponement. My first two times were anything but! Hermy's a lucky girl she got so much foreplay.

I'll admit that I suck at writing reviews, but beleive me, when something really catches my eye I get off my ass and let my appreciation be known. I'm sorry that I've been faithfully following your story but hadn't written until now.

Great job! I also have been loving how you keep the characters pretty much 'in character' and seek to make people have to think with your superior vocabulary-- it's one of the things I love about writing for HG, SS and DM that makes it authentic to use "big words"-- cuz they totally would!! (ha-ha, they read a lot and can be quite formal)

Anyway, thanks for your contribution to the fanfic community..... it's certainly a gem :) May the muses always be with you....
schedule April 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Glad they made up. HOpe more is to come soon.
person anyesha
schedule April 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
u really should be a professional...............that was amazing soooooo sweet how hermione took him to eat.........dude....they r sooo in LOVE...........

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