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I could see chapter 9 being a longer story.

damn 'red' was poignant! loves it :D off to read more...

" As she walked up the deserted stairs, she slowly began to realise isolating herself might not have been a good idea, for that pervasive darkness she'd sensed before seemed to grow and solidify around her, cocooning her in." - horror, i literally felt the chill.
Great job with conveying the mood and Hermione's emotions... soy sauce huh? interesting. Wonder if there's a larger metaphor at stake... or maybe I'm just hungry : /

Nerys, I've always been a fan of yours. I've read all your stuff and favorited you on fanfiction.net. I actually wanted to email you this but sadly you've hidden it from crazy stalkers like myself. In these drabbles, the one where Voldemort kidnaps Hermione after Harry killed Bellatrix.. I saw so much potential. I had a request if you could make that into a story and if not, may I use it later (you with all the credit) if I ever write a fanfiction. Which more likely than not I never will. It is something about that scene... I love you as a writer and I knife you're busy with The Prisoner and the story with the Serpent In Red, but I would love it.

Know^
Sorry. Stupid phone.

Holy Hell, I love these stories!

This makes me think how cool it would've been if Jo had made a series from Voldemort's POV... *sigh*

At Yoga Mat

That was probably the most gruesome smut I've read. But it was smut so YAY! Liked it a lot :) Got me thinking about Dexter, actually! Bloody brilliant, if you pardon the pun ;) Especially with the Dark Mark being inside her. *Miya thinking of several ways it could have got inside her*, that was just neat.

Oooh *drool* That was so, so, so good! :D SMUT!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't know what I expected but this is definitely better that whatever it was (that didn't make sense, did it?).
Let me just marry him, dammit!

Ooooh it's Shannie's first official review with her AFF account...

I loved all the chapters! wonderful, wonderful!

Okay, so we're here to comment on smut because it's AFF. I loved the Yoga Mat one shot. Brilliant. You managed to give me a lot of information despite the fact that it was technically a one-shot. For example, why Hermione was there, Voldemort's possible motives for seducing her. It was dark too and Voldemort was, as one can expect with a Nerys fic, well in character.

The smut was well written, with the right amounts of build up, tension and then the act itself *drools*. I love an evil Dark Lord...

Oh and can I just say I adored your "Exam" one shot as well! the snark between Tom and Hermione was so well done. It had me giggling the whole way through.
Thanks for cheering up a very sleep deprived person with these XD

xo Shan