rate_review Reviews

Umm first off obviously a cool idea and well executed. I would of avoided them actually touching each other at all during this chapter and just let them watch as the vines got each other off thus planting the seed for a sex scene later on. But you were probably looking to do just a one chapter story which is cool. Keep writing it's good and will only get better. I look forward to your next story.

Nice. Did they keep going back to visit the plant over the years?

And I love the "what happened to Quirrel" explanation :)

i loved that chapter it had everything in it i can't wait for the next chapter or story keep up the awesome work

your fan kaii