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for The Descent of Magic

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think the meeting went really well! Course I am a dork... I thought they would have charts or something of their evidence lol.
schedule May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
let the games begin. will har and draco be making their research available for public display? He and draco will make a most formidable team i think... well, at least this has got draco distracted from thinking about trying to make another heir.
schedule May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i found that this is really good but i do hope draco will be better and harry would walk again without pain
schedule May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
was his knee so far gone that even muggle medicine couldn't give him a prosthetic knee cap? I don't know how that'd react with har's internal magic but it's gotta be better than being in blazing agony and pretty much house bound 24/7. I woulda thought that'd be one of the first things mio thought of.

that to the side, and so draco's har education continues. he's going to end up with a LOT of modifications on his mind view of har in the future, bet on it.

winces. oi he really is a little prize oik isn't he. he reminds me of those stalker fan boys who send their target threatening letters when they do anything that doesn't fit the mental image the stalker fan has of them. truly shudder worthy.

Lol,nicely played har. Way to get them to shut up and shut down and at least have a stab of working together. ^.^
person SP777
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #7...

Potter looked as if he might protest, but then snorted instead. Draco tracked the trail
of small drops of mucus across the kitchen,..

-okaaay, there are details and there are too many details, don't you think that was a little
excessive? O_o

Despite all that, I'm glad to see that they are starting to get the process started on this
theory of Harry's, it'll be interesting to see how it is accepted in 'high' society.
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I got my fireworks. Great update!
person moodysavage
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
'odd contentment'... could Draco be... sorta'....happy... about working with Harry? or having Harry do something like a pure-blood? or about Harry warning Hermione to behave too?

:)
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your response to my review made be giggle.
well, your talent for leaving your readers wanting more certainly hasn't dipped. apart from asking awkward questions what in the world did hugo do?
Still, rose is right. har is being very 'ganther harry' and that's sad of a wizard not yet 50 when they live well past 100 given a chance. Still, i don't think the kids realise just how draining dealing with pain is.
anywho, it's going to be fun to see how Malfoy manages to get the word out there and what he does with har since he's most likely along for the ride.
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Draco is still such a perfect example of a Slytherin lol
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the review response. *rubs hands suspiciously* I can't wait! *cackles evilly* Update soon!

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