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for The Descent of Magic

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #4..

Yep, I see right now every time Harry's knee is mentioned I get flashbacks, bad
enough I have ankle problems to deal with...

Okay, I must admit this is a highly original problem that I've seen so far...house elf magic that affects
the fertility of pureblood families? Hunh..I like to see what solution you come up
with.
schedule April 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Facinating. I want to know too!
schedule April 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
shakes my head at draco, what a nog. though, i do admit scorp's taking it to the extremes.

sorry you know about the leg pain thing. mine's from the lower back and the hips and they have three modes, almost normal, no forward momentum (I can still go sideways for some reason, just not forward) and won't take my weight at all. (hence why i can review so much, i'm stuck in bed more often than not. >>) at any rate, I hope your knees are better. having legs that are unreliable and or painful sucks hairy goat balls. Har has my sympathy... and draco my amused and slightly bemused, mild contempt.
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i just want harry happy and draco scorp is a little ass
person SP777
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

I'm sorry, but I would have smacked Scorpius across the dinner table & down
the hall for that lack of respect...and then dared him to say something to me back.

Who would have thought that Harry would have the better son....I guess Draco would.
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I actually feel bad for Draco for having a son who is testing him on purpose all the time. Rather like a toddler does when they learn the meaning of the word no and test whether it will actually work for them. I think Draco should ask Harry if he'd like to switch lol.
person SP777
schedule April 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #2...

1. On Darwin, yes I can see how 'controversial' he would seem especially back in those
times when 83% of the people were adamant against change, 10% wanted change, but feared
for themselves and the 7% who did fight against the status quo were ridiculed, ostracizied...or
killed.

2. Okay, after trying to wrap my head around the magical theory you had the nerve to introduce in
this story :-), I've come to the conclusions it is either a magical malady or the simple solution
of how pureblood witches & wizards lived in the past. In other words, if one group of wizards choose
to create a controlled environment where the need for children no longer apply, then there will be a
noticable change in how wizards procreate as opposed to the wizards who live in an environment where
the need to survive depends on an increase of population.

That's where the rich & the poor come in...the rich had it all, servants, commodity, everything at their beck &
call, and as long as one heir was produced the bloodline could continue. Also, the need to keep the line 'pure', with relations
between close relatives, factors into the decrease of heirs produced.

As for the poor, because the percentage of them were higher than those who were rich, there were many different bloodlines to choose
from when it came to procreating, so the bloodlines weren't necessarily 'purer', it just resulted in the magic within the bloodlines
eventually over time becoming stronger. Plus, the fact middle class to poorer families had to fend for themselves more in order to provide
and maintain provisions in the environment they were in, which resulted in more childbirths.

...and with all that said, I'm done! By the way, all of those conclusions is just me trying to see it based on common sense than what
it was I 'learned' in school. So, what do you think, is there more to what I've said?

But, then again, you have a different theory in mind, when it comes to this story. ;-)

3. Three steps and his knee locked up, the part in the middle that often felt liquid shifting and blending with the frozen joints
O_O ....okay, you're making me remember the time I hurt my knee when I was 12, damn thing gave me problems off & on for 7 years...I'm
cringing over here, girl. Too bad, this isn't a crossover story, Harry could benefit from Orihime, from the Bleach anime.
person Nathoca Malfoy
schedule April 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really curious... What could he have found??? Kisses.
person dominique1
schedule April 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is really good the house elf have either curse the wizard because of the control wizards had on them and were mean to them or its their magic that caused it i don't want people going around killing house elf's maybe while they or pregnant they need to be away from elf's i just hope that if they allow house elf's to have their babies and treat them fair this is so good
schedule April 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I wonder how house-elves are inferring with Wizarding fertility?

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