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April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...what happens next! Good start...Ug I can only imagine seeing him in the store....she probably has so much going through her brain right now! I look forward to your next update!
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April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This seems like it is going to be really good, i am excited to read more
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April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Update sooonnnnn plz!!!!
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April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Decent start, but you really could use a beta. The story would flow better if you worked the grammar and sentence structure.