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Well hun, I have looked far and wide for that fic but it looks like the website that it was on is no longer up and running :/ Then again it was at least 5 years ago that I read it last so I suppose these thing will happen...a pity really. But if you would like a really really really great slash HP fic to read I would strongly recommend The pendulum of choice by Rushlight if you havn't read it yet. It can be found here : http://slashcity.org/rushlight/hp/pendulum.htm . Its possibly the best HP fic ever written :) However it is novel length...trust me, once you start reading you will not be able to stop. If you want a shorter fic to read, a really good Snarry that i just finished reading with an incredibly well written Snape can be found here http://archive.skyehawke.com/story.php?no=11420 . Its called the fourth year and is sweet, heart-warming and incredibly written.

"That is the hardest I will ever 'hit' you, youngling." had me in tears, and i'm betting just from those tells, ilsa will know quite a bit about har's previous 'home life'.

is there any other way for a seal to get a dragon make over? charlies was made under rather extreme circumstances. i hope har will have a chance to learn more soon. he keeps putting his foot in things by accident.

yeah, me too, it makes me completely crazy. sort of raaaaaaarrgh, what a waste!

You were right; that was a very evil place to end chapter 36 :(

Please update chapter 37 soon ^_^

Thanks for answering my review, I really appreciate the fact that you take my opinion into account...so many authors don't take creative critism very well. The truth is I wouldn't be writing a review if I didn't think u had potential :) Being a student myself I know how little time you sometimes have on your hands in order to write so I certainly admire the awesome feat of writing such a large and multi-chaptered story. I started a few but never finished them ...the characters just never wanted to do what I wanted,lol. I have been reading HP fics for over a decade now tho...which brings me back to the golem thing, I might mention that a certain story I read a while ago had Snape creating 3 Golems and then charming them to look and act like him. They were a present for his mate who became unsatiable when he was in heat ( also creature fic) and we all know Snape can be so possesive he doesn't want his mate to be with anybody but him...it was also quite the sex scene...it could be really hot if Theo created a golem twin look alike and they made a Harry sandwitch <3 mmm...or Theo could use it for fighting I guess but yeah smexy twin is the best option ^^

Good writing, I like your detail and sentence structuring and that Dumbly is such a meddling old coot. Still finding it a bit hard to believe that the Weasley twins who are usually as sharp as a tack pretty much didn't notice anything strange going on with Harry. I was personally also a bit annoyed at the intoduction of Harrys new pet/familiar. Firstly it seemed a bit highly coincidental that Harry would be right there when it hatched and that it would be Dragel pet. Then you referenced a movie that I have never watched so I first had to google it to know what the critter looked like. Not cool :/ It seems a bit overly cute. I'm sorry, but I have been reading fics for years and years and although I know the whole creature inheritance on his birthday with surprising mates is not new I did like this perspective...but at times I feel you are trying a bit to hard. Its just like the authors that give Harry a pet snake familiar. It makes the reader wonder if you couldn't have gone beyond the obvious of giving a dragon a pet dragon ( that you just invented)and done something like give him a temperamental sylph or a golem ( as Theos power is earth). Something which already exists in mythology but that could be linked into the story. Something that could show you going beyond the obvious choice...it doesn't take much time to research and it would be very much appreciated ...

lotsa forebodings in this chappie. sounds like things are bad, getting worse. So, either dumbles laid a hex on har, convinced har's parents to lay a hex on har or V's Har-crux is acting as a seal in and of itself. that i could believe. Some thing like that riding shotty is bound to screw u over.

well, that's a relief. I think you're only the second writer i've read who would be willing to include a 'how it ended' summery if you lose the plot for this story. cause, as convoluted as it is, i would really miss not knowing how it ended. ^^

I'm so happy you updated! I was worried for a bit that you'd posted all the rest because you were abandoning this story. I can't wait to see why Harry's mentor never showed up and what Dumbledore pulls next!

wow, poor mio. she's just NOT winning here is she. She's so far up sewage creek she's practically already plunging over the waterfall. will mr hell hound give her some guidance in training her 'gift'. cause she's been pretty rudderless so far.

so, do all of Molly's kids have the drag potential or just charlie (and possibly the twins... gotta be some reason har was so comfy with them, neh?)

Absolutely LOVE this story ^_^ I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Please update chapter 35 soon ^_~

Holy crap, I logged in this morning and there were 19 chapters and I got home from work and there were 34! I was so happy, I stayed up late just to read! I was thinking and it's a little odd that Dumbledore knew all about Harry being a Draegal before he told him, and he hired the new professor who was a Draegal too. Is Dumbledore a Draegal too? And was he supposed to be Harry's mentor? Can't wait to read more!