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Hmmm this is..... Interesting to say the least. I think it's too early to really decide if it's good or bad but I'm definitely interested. Out of all the creatures I never thought one would come up with a slug. I don't have anything negative to say about it and I am looking forward to this to see where you take it an what characters you pair him up with. Though I do have a question regarding that; are u taking suggestions? ^^ update soon.

Green

Seeing JayDee's request all those months ago made me extremely curious if anyone would take it up, and I'm very glad that you've done so!

I love your sense of humor! You had me sniggering right at the beginning with his commentary on the copious amounts of fluid in his bed. And the commentary on Dumbledore was priceless!

The pool on 'deadly threats to Harry Potter's life' was a nice touch. ;)

Thanks for sharing that - it was an auspicious beginning! I certainly hope you continue. Happy writing!

at least har has been smart/sensible enough to go to the hospital wing by himself in this one. in others it happens at the dursleys or har tries to hide it. I wonder what he'll be... and i do hope he doesn;t get a slime coat all the time. that'd be damned uncomfortable.