rate_review Reviews

Great story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

I check back every day to see if this story has updated- I miss it so much!!

Can't wait for the next chapter, I've really fallen in love with this story <3

Oh man. This fic is perfect in so many ways. I personally have no pain tolerance, but I know others who want that kind of play from their Doms. I love to read about it, I just don't mix well with it personally. I will be checking back for updates. I wonder if Harry will ever be taken to a club and allowed to meet another sub. It's always relaxing to meet another active sub. It really does help to ease the mind.

Still loving the story and thank you for answering my question! Can't :D

Omg love it!! Awesome chapter as always! I can't wait to read the next one! :)

thanks for another buetifuly written chapter :)

Moooore pleeeeease! It's great!

More spankings!

I have just found this story and I love the idea. I thought I would share some encouragement and one suggestion.
The master/slave dynamic very well thought out. The way Harry is finding freedom in bondage (literal and metaphorically) feels real. Also, I like to think about pain in the way this story shows it. Pain can serve as a link to the moment. It can serve to ground you in the present.
Not going to say anything about the yummy bits because I think you know they are hot and absolutely perfect.
I have one suggestion. Some of the dialog seems stiff. This story could benefit from a beta as far as the non-sexy dialog goes.

Great chapter!! It's good that they are getting to know each other and not just jump right in, it's more believable- not to mention the UST is fun to watch! Poor Harry, doesn't know what to do with his new feelings. Thanks for the update! :)