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for Punish Me

by Sparrowhawk

person Penguins
schedule August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Words cannot express how much I adore this story. I can honestly say its one of the best thongs I have ever read. I wish I could express how much I love this but that's impossible. So just know that I am ridiculously infatuated with every thong about your story from character portrayals to plot tobwrittinf style. I think you are doing a fabulous job.
Also, I made an account for this story so I don't know if you can see my e-mail address or it I need to send it to you seperately but I'd really like to know when you update.
person kitty
schedule July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
loves this update soon
schedule July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit that's hot! Just found your story and I LOVE IT! I haven't done anything but read your story for the last few hours. I think Harry makes such a cute sub and Severus is perfect for him:) I can't wait for more.

If you could add me to your update list that would be amazing! sam.lailey13@gmail.com
person chii
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Gosh I really liked this story so so so much. Please by all means include me in your email update list, I would be really greatful if you do. And now, I just need to add master at the end and I will sound like the perfect submissive. I was planning to write 'that would mean the world to me' instead but I digress.

I really like this story an am hoping to see how their relationship grows. I must also admit that I am very much excited to see how their relationship with Lucius would grow. I can't wait to read more.

(Daethal@gmail.com)
person thumper
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story cant wait for more please put me on the update list email is sara.gilliam@hawks.huntingdon.edu
person BAFan
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 17

Wow. Very intense chapter. Also a very good chapter! Awaiting the next update.

Found a typo:

"'Shhh,' Severus soothed his distraught submissive as he pulled him around, used a handkerchief to wipe his running nose, tucked him into his chest, and held him as tightly as he dared, loathe to hurt him after such a severe punishment."

Should be "loath."
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So much love for this story! Please put me on your update list. My email address is heatherandjamjam@gmail.com :) hope you feel better soon. I can't wait to see how Harry does with Luci involved hehehe
person djaddict
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry, Harry, Harry. Sigh. But I guess he wouldn't be himself if he didn't run off half-cocked.

This was a good chapter, the punishment was perfectly done. The chapter before was one of my favorites though, even though they didn't get much after care.

Eagerly anticipating more!
person Ciara_D
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Continue to enjoy this one. Can't wait to see more Lucius involved.
person Ciara_D
schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good, quite good!

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