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October 10, 2020 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story with great characterization. Thanks so much for writing
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September 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story but you desperately need a beta reader You have quite a few grammar mistakes in every chapter ,afew mispelled words, and missing words in a few sentences in every chapter.
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August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello dear,
after some search i found you here with your more spicy work.
This story is better than your average ones.
A bit sad at times and dense but your insight of the two is very satisfying.
I liked it very much.
Hope to find your other great story's soon.
See you
after some search i found you here with your more spicy work.
This story is better than your average ones.
A bit sad at times and dense but your insight of the two is very satisfying.
I liked it very much.
Hope to find your other great story's soon.
See you