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July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your story very much, sweet and touching. I also like how the story can be seen as an extension of canon Year 3. I do wish there were more details on how Nimah's friends and families change over the course of their relationship.
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July 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story! You gave Remus a more human & believable dimension, I felt. You're a great storyteller, please keep writing! Thank you for sharing your talent here.
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June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! i can review your story! I have been trying to send you a review all morning but it kept saying i wasn't logged in...
Anyways, I am really enjoying this story. I am not done yet but I appreciate the originality of your work. I especially like how you are working in the Patronus Charm and I have a feeling her's will be a wolf... but I am just guessing.
I really like how you added in the bit about her not being emotionally ready to cast the charm because her soul is not fully developed maturely... again i am guessing that Remus will help that bit develop too... lol
anyways i will come back and finish this but alas work is calling and I must answer! can't wait to read more later!
Anyways, I am really enjoying this story. I am not done yet but I appreciate the originality of your work. I especially like how you are working in the Patronus Charm and I have a feeling her's will be a wolf... but I am just guessing.
I really like how you added in the bit about her not being emotionally ready to cast the charm because her soul is not fully developed maturely... again i am guessing that Remus will help that bit develop too... lol
anyways i will come back and finish this but alas work is calling and I must answer! can't wait to read more later!
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awww....i love this story. i love Lupin!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!