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June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the way this is shaping up. Keep up the great work
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June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's hard to say anything about the story with a static, descriptive start like this. But it's definitely perfectly written, and you already created an atmosphere as well as defined our two favourite characters in a way that makes me look forward to the next chapter.
Great start!
Great start!