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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
still love this story, wished you had daily updates
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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
in my humble opinion Severus should just go and get Harry, he's the adult after all and he should not allow the child to dictate his actions
anyway, love the story
anyway, love the story
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September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I find this a bit confusing. But it is interesting none the less. I just with there was more story and less chat room stuff. Looking forward to more though.
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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
THAT... was incredibly confusing. I din follow the chat room chatter very well. That to the side, har's lack of trust is understandable considering the adults in har's life have proven decidedly unreliable. I hope Snape can get har to trust him 'cause the way his rellies are headed they may very well kill him accidentally. Dumbles has a lot of karma owing due to his neglect.
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you know, it is a bit unfair, Severus knowing who justharry is, but Harry not knowing who the Darkmaster is. I noticed when Severus called Harry "Potter" and not "justharry" in the privat dialog, but well, I guess it's much more interesting this way :D
otherwise, it's still a great chapter, except for Dumdork, I would love it to hit his head with a baseball
and well, you did notice that there's a story missing? you deleted it? what happened?
otherwise, it's still a great chapter, except for Dumdork, I would love it to hit his head with a baseball
and well, you did notice that there's a story missing? you deleted it? what happened?
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
alright, this damn code again!
well, what I wanted to say is, I hate it that you always have Harry nearly dead before sending Severus for his rescue, I wondered what it would have been like if you had Severus visiting Harry now, after the last dialog instead of talking with Dumbledork first.
and that I love your stories anyeay of course :D
well, what I wanted to say is, I hate it that you always have Harry nearly dead before sending Severus for his rescue, I wondered what it would have been like if you had Severus visiting Harry now, after the last dialog instead of talking with Dumbledork first.
and that I love your stories anyeay of course :D
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August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another wonderful chapter, i am thoroughly enjoying this story :) and sev finally pushes enough to make harry slip up and spill about what's really been going on. and snape actually went to dumbles about it, and of course gets told to just sit back and wait. know that's not going to go over well. wonderful work, keep it up :)
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August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hooli doolie, is dumbles TRYING to make another dark lord?! Leaving a vulnerable person in an environment he KNOWS he gets abused in?! Seriously, whats the point of saving his life if he loses his will in the meantime. If Har ever learns that dumbles knew he'll never trust an adult again.
I do hope sev isn't just going to leave it at that... Har deserves better. No matter WHAT dumbles says, Har can't stay there. hell, a house with Fidelous (or however you spell that) on it would be safer.
I do hope sev isn't just going to leave it at that... Har deserves better. No matter WHAT dumbles says, Har can't stay there. hell, a house with Fidelous (or however you spell that) on it would be safer.
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August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Regarding Chapter 5 Dumbledore is such a jerk. The way he is leaning forward, hanging on Severus's answers, it is almost like he is Rita Skeeter listening in for the next bit of gossip. UGH!
Looking forward to when Vernon will get his own.
Looking forward to when Vernon will get his own.
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I recognize your chat client, it's the one you use in real life too, isn't it?
hope you had a nice holidays, despite the mud you've had to fight your way through *lol*
hopw you'll update this tomorrow
hope you had a nice holidays, despite the mud you've had to fight your way through *lol*
hopw you'll update this tomorrow