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It's been a while since I've been on AFF, but I was sure I logged in o.o Oh well.
This story is absolutely gorgeous. I love Laine and Harry together<3 I'm not used to really reading anything but PWP or a story filled with smut, but you know... You're story is just so amazing that I don't really care ( not that I don't have dirty thoughts about them together). Is there something between Severus and Armand? :o Idk if it's just me, but there's like just this feeling... lool xD

I can't wait to read the next chapter! If I knew how to fav stories on here, I totally would add this.

I really love your story! I love how Laine and Harry protect each other. Their relationship is beautiful eventhough they're brothers. I hope to know more about their past. Especially harry's. I feel so bad for snape. Hopefully he can reunite with his sons. Keep up the great work and update soon.

Ah if Laine had the same dreams as Snape, I'm sure we'll have a very angry dom on our hands. I cannot wait to see his reaction because he'll know what Snape saw. He's filled with hate, isn't he? I really hope he doesn't run off with Harry. That's something horrible for him to suffer through at such a young age.

I think this is an interesting concept. I think it's well written and the concepts are believable. However, I have to admit that I have not fully looked into the psychological components to dom/sub relationships. I can understand how one could develop as a coping mechanism for excessive trauma at a young age, which is both of your characters seems to have experienced.

Hi there,
I like what this story is doing and these are lovely long chapters!
Although the story is so AU it could almost be an original with just a few changes!

Great story though so far and I will definitely keep an eye out for updates. Keep up the writing!

inyeresting more please...

I like the flow of this story, it moves quite well.

cool story!! I can't wait to see what happens next.