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for Out with the Old

by Shan84

person Mia
schedule April 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story is sublime! I'll sure be reading more of your works :)
person Slyth
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really loooooove it. Juste amazing !
I love Tom <3
person Alassea Riddle
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, I loved it!
And Riddle ruling over the penguins in Antarctica... somehow that thing will never get old XD HAHA xD
It's really well done, and I LOVED the smut too :3
person Mekom
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome fic. You always do such a great job. Tom is such a quintessential Slytherin. Although, I guess he is "the Slytherin," as you put it. I am amused by the pranking war. It was interesting to see their relationship develop.
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I have to tell you that this pairing isn't usually my cup of tea, but I really liked this! The way you built the relationship made sense. The plot was unique and the story was very readable. Excellent writing. Oh by the ay, I don't know if you know this or not, but when I checked to see if you had other stories, it showed that you had two of them and both of them were actually this story. Just thought to give you a heads up just in case you wanted to fix that. Thanks for sharing and I hope to read more of your work soon!
person Nerys
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, you already know how much I enjoyed reading this story. I loved the instant going back and forth between Hermione and Tom, the comments are just so humorous, and how they continuously upstaged the other. So much fun. I love how you write them.

And then, I get to the smut. Something I've not read yet. YAY! Thanks for that delicious smut scene. *drools* I so loved the way they still snarked at each other even then. LOL. But it was nicely hot. *fans self*

I'll beta that smut scene for you soon, too. I spotted a couple of typos here and there, and there was a little nitpicky thingy in the smut scene that you overlooked (I'll tell you through email). But I hope you don't mind that I won't get around to it today. Miya, Serp and I went through the other fic today and I'm knackered.

Anyway, thank you for your wonderful story. I so loved it, and I know Miya did, she was oh-ing and ah-ing while Serp and I were working hard. *pointed stare at Miya* ;)

xx Nerys

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