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for Unspoken Desires

by Lumos

person Lumos
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Format? As in font? Or style of writing? Because I think it sounds pretty much like the other chaps.
person Sara
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please update? Pretty please?
person Sara
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great summary, I'm pleased you said when this is set as I was trying to figure it out myself and not having much success. I love the little teasers that summary has given too, very excited now :)
Just out of curiousity, why the age difference between Snape and Lupin?
person Lumos
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wanted Severus to appear as someone Remus could trust to be stronger, dominant, and more expierienced. And Remus is much shyer and smaller than Severus, which I think helps in the whole dynamic of the relationship.
schedule July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, thank you clearing some things up, I had figured that all of that would come out in the story later. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Blur
schedule July 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I always love this pairing. But not a lot of fanfiction on this pairing. I am very grateful to have you writing this Pairing. This story is very good. Can't wait for the next update.
person Sara
schedule July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I kinda just want to hug Remus and tell him it's okay to trust Snape and then just give him some chocolate ;)
person treana
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very cute; I do like it very much. :) The portrayal of their characters is interesting and the concept works very well. I think "boy" may have been overused a tad and I'm unsure about the ages, but otherwise I really like this story so far and really hope to see more! ;)
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This seems like an interesting story.
I'm not completely sure about it but I'm giving it a try.
So is Remus going to follow Snape around like a dog all the time?
Will he walk regular or on all fours? (when he's not being carried)
Oh and Is this going to be a fic where Voldemort wins?
schedule July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmm so is this post 1st war or the 2nd?

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