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August 23, 2025 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story!
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October 27, 2021 at 12:00 AM
HOT AS FUCK!!!!!!
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July 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Soooooo HOT!!!!!!
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July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Holy fucking God... I want my goes to be like that!
Fuck that was hot... Great job! X
Fuck that was hot... Great job! X
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September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Nice work:)
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July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, that was great! Loved the simplicity and the down and dirty smut! Thank you
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July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
gotdamn im weak from multiple mental orgasms!!!
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July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Totally HOT!!!!!!!!!! Let me assure you, your writing is outstanding and I look forward to reading anything you post here. *^_^*
Hugs,
TCQ
Hugs,
TCQ
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July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O. M. G. That was hot! Snape could blindfold me in the library any day!
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July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very good one-shot - very hot and naughty, love fics with Snape, Hermione and books. You can ignore the following constructive criticism if you want : Please re-think writing cum vs. come. To me, as a longtime writer "come" is the appropriate word to use when having an orgasm. "Cum" sounds very noobish and juvenile (to me). I see it alot, so if you prefer to write cum that is your prerogative, just my 2 cents worth. Also the ending was okay but it would have been hotter if it really was her first time, or if it was at a later time in their relationship and was re-enacted for an anniversary - a special occasion.
You write SS/HG very well and I can't wait to see more of your work!! I saw there were no ratings yet so I went back to give you 5 stars!
You write SS/HG very well and I can't wait to see more of your work!! I saw there were no ratings yet so I went back to give you 5 stars!