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for Dare Ya!

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person anncee
schedule July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww I wish this one would've been longer. It was such a good story and really juicy too :) well all good things must come to an end I suppose. Thanks for writing~
schedule July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not a single review?? You were sort of all over the place but not in an entirely unpleasant way. I do like your concept of Truth or Dare. And everything up until how you brought Hermione to him at the end was flawless. There's just something about her as a simpering submissive that irks me; you wrote it well enough- it just never seems to suit her. I mean I certainly don't think she's the dominatrix type, it just- at any rate, minus some minor errors that could be easily fixed with a beta it seemed like a well organized fluid story. We got glimpses of everyone which was rather nice. And I do love how the first dare was to have the wolf bite her. That was truly impressive. Commendable.
person Maggie
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! Especially George's comment in the last chapter "really?"
Really made me laugh ;)
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wondered who Harry would end up with... Draco and a twin are good choices :)
person Theresa
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed the dynamics of this story. Each chapter update has been a treat I've enjoyed.
I would love to see more action but I console myself with the knowledge that you have written so many wonderful fics, that I can read your other works when this one ends... Thanks for writing such great stories!
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thast right harry bitch out Padfoot for being stupid.
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Slowly dragging a bit more out of the proverbial closet... I was shocked there was no truth or dare that chapter~! They'll have to make up for the lack of action *wink wink*
person Amber
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Hermione goes next :)
person Mark's Pet
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot and the issues with Sirius and James/Harry.

But bring back the smut!!! I want to see more of Severus/Hermione, Lucius/Ginny, and Remus/Luna/Fred/George *evil grin* that is where you were taking the last ones, weren't you?!?!?!?!?! Even some Harry/Draco.

But I must say, the dominant Remus is very HOT!!!

Can I have an Alpha Male Werewolf to play with too? Or better yet, can I swap places with Luna!!!!
person redhead23
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE.....please. I'm totally loving this fic and want to see poor Ginny get the attention that she deserves haha.

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