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for Beyond the Pale

by goldhorse

person Dragonfire
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you !!! Another fantastic chapter, I absolutely love how you portray Draco and Hermione without breaking their true characters. Keep writing please :)
person Ideefixe
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! You cant leave us there. I just have to see his reaction. Gah! Great job, I totally didnt expect Draco to be turned so early. Thank you so ever much for posting.
person Kimbovet
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wish to thank your muse for all her great work lately. That was an evil cliffhanger with Draco, so I hope you update soon.
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Evil woman to end it that way and of course we are going to review and comment on your amazing writing skills. You put out a line and we bite every time 'hook line and sinker'. Loved this chapter but was cussing at Lysander.
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
keep up the fantastic story, loving the reappearance of your OC's :)
person Saphire Phoenix
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have to come up with different theme music-I can't keep hearing the Peanut's Song when I see your pen name. It's so wrong to hear that when I am reading your sexy stories. Nickelback, 3 Doors Down, Carlos Santana...I am mentally calling up that music to drown out Schroeder.

Yea for Alex! I am glad that he is giving her the choice. I am also very glad that you turned Draco. I also thought his reaction to finding out the woman that he was lusting after was actually Hermione to spot on. Well done, milady. I am so happy that you posted today.
person misty
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! I'm so glad Alex is back even if it's not with Melody. And Draco is very believable too. I agree that he would be starting to question all of his family's beliefs at about that age. Even with being forced to take the Dark Mark. I can't wait for his reaction when he finds out who "Rain" really is!!! Keep up the good work!
person buttercup
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like alex and the draco undeniable pull towards hermione already is great..
person Hannah
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YAY I love this story :D thankyou for writing it
person dragonfire
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More please :) lol x

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