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by goldhorse

person Saphire Phoenix
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Schroeder was banging away on that little keyboard of his.....another Happy Snoopy Dance. I just love it when Draco is jealous and I adore Alex. I am glad that you are putting him in this story too.
person Melusine
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love this!! So happy to see Alex back! Can't wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sending a big heaping pile of chocolate for your muse and thanks for another wonderful chapter! I was having a rather day night then I read this an it cheered me right up! I loved the intereaction between Hermione and Draco (and Melody). Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter of Fooling Fate, I will be checking daily now
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous! I did notice that once, when Hermione is talking to Alex at the house, you accidentally say Melody instead of Hermione.... Other than that, it's absolutely perfect. :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous!!!! :)
person buttercup
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
are you sure that hermione cant have babies i mean she hermione she has to be far more special than any other vampire. but other than that i really like this story and i cant wait for the next chapter t come out..
person Ideefixe
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You posted!! Thank you for not making us wait! You rock! Im totally intrigued by Draco acting like a spoiled child when his toy is taken away. I love that he doesnt even know her and the pull is that strong.
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ahh love it, cant wait for the next chapter! did you say update... YES PLEASE!!!
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazinnng!! One of you names needs fixing though "
person Saphire Phoenix
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yaahh!! Two updates in one day and a sexy Severus in biker leathers..it just doesn't get any better than this. So the scent of a vampire mate is like that of the Amortensia potion in that it is diffent for each person, but compelling : I like it. I cannot wait for the next installment. I wonder how Draco is going to react to being the mate of a woman who is not only muggleborn, but a vampire as well. Heh, heh.

Please keep going, my lady and allow me to give you a visual: a six foot tall, curly brown haired woman (who also rides a motorcycle-the gas mileage is great) doing the happy Snoopy dance. Your muse must have a leash in one had and a riding crop in the other for you. Bless you both!

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