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for The Forever Game

by uqui

person Me
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Didn't see you had updated! Great two chapters. I sometimes like evil Dumbledore stories, so awesome. My guess is a shapeshifter demon.
person Maiyanna
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The only species that i can think of that is reborn is A pheonix. If that is now it than I am at a complete loss, Other than that i really love this story, i look for it everyday. Cant wait for there to be more.
person Mitch
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to drop a note to tell you I appreciate your story, and continue to look forward to each chapter. As for what Voldemort is I have no Idea but since I'm writing this I will guess Demon, only because you said Dumbles was the same and he always seemed a little demonic to me. Congrats and keep up the good work.
person varaivolf
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know this is tough ^^ lol great chapters by the way :D so uhmm guessing...again...uhm a Basilisk Hybrid thingy? XD
person Miri Daray
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am still loving the story as it develops. I have to go with King Cobra because 1. it's a snake and 2. it is king.... Thank you for continuing writing!
person blue waterlilly
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmm I'm going back to the guess of Manticor. Immortal, has snaky bits and other bits that would make him both territorial and possessive of his mate. This chapter is still as amazing as always.
person Eve
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this!!! The sex is written so well I don't feel like I'm reading porn cuz some other fics have that feel to me. Is voldemort some sort of demon, like an incubus lol just a weird guess :P
person Mao374
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really hot :>
anyway i have to guess so i zink something like a male version of Lamia... Hum de dum, he could be a seraph, now that would be cool cos the story i'm working on i'm using seraphs... (trying to be original...) anyway my guess is Lamia
So anyway great job, and can't wait to see new chappies. :D
person EvilDime
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally also got around to reading this. I don't mind the plot, actually have a kink for it. ^^ I do, however, mind the way things are split up in this story. The plot looks quite nice, the, umh, interaction is great as well - but both constantly keep interrupting each other! I'd love to have the entire hot scene at once, to enjoy in full, and *then* get into the details of how they got here, what's going on in politics, what kind of creature Dumbledore might be, yadda yadda... and then the *next* Harry/Voldemort scene, preferably also in full. It's mildly, well, *frustrating* if the hot smexx keeps getting interrupted.
Otherwise, no complaints. *g*
- Dime
person blue waterlilly
schedule August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmm my next guess is a Cockatrice. A snake with wings and still the ability to kill with a look however some myths say they are rather lovely creatures and can sing as prettily as a bird.

Another amazing chapter I'm awaiting in awe for the next!

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