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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh the beginning is very, very, very interesting I love how you picked the perfect moment to start this story!
Can't wait for the next chap! ;-)
Can't wait for the next chap! ;-)
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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hoping there is a second chapter to this. The ending was far too abrupt, but I thoroughly enjoyed the rest of this story.
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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice!!! I love your Severus already. And, good for her for going for what she wants! Man, I hope you have more of this coming soon! Thank you, HG4eva
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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it
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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice story line, but you have several typos you may want to clean up, just spelling. Promising tale and can