Never have I read a story where you've made harry look like a bitch and hermione be so OOC. In what world would hermione ever betray harry to the point that you had her do here. You made drama for the sake of drama and completely missed the entire point of a functional harmony fanfiction and that is putting their friendship first and honesty. Congratulations you've just turned a great ship into something that would be found in a trashy romance novel written by a horny angsty teenaged girl with screwed up expectations of relationships stop writing for this ship please thank you
I quite enjoyed this, though I wish there were more steamy scenes between Harry and Hermione.
OMG! Now that is how a FF should be written!I must say the torture scene at the end, i about couldn't take it! I nearly threw up! WOW A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ MUAT READ! Thank you for writing this!!
More, more and more..... The story is well thought out and written. The emotions, harry's turmoil and charcater perception; simply amazing. I hope you pick up where you left.
Wwwhhaaaoooo i love the affection toward hermione:)
Hey!
Love the story so far :) I was wondering if you were working on any new chapters?
I don't think it's too fluffy. Neither one would have been able too work through their personal issues while the war was on going.Hermione's big cry in this chapterwas to be expected after so many years of not knowing.
Pliz write the next chapter. This story is soooo amazing i cannot wait any longer to read wat happens next.
I started reading this story on another site but decided I wanted the mature story. I am so glad you are committed to writing this the way you have planned it, I would be so bummed if you left it with only one more chapter. This is really good and look forward to where it goes. My guess is that Harry volunteered to teach Sex Ed class. Look forward to more.
I like this story, keep it up! I'm really interested in seeing where this is going now Harry and Hermione have finally hooked up.
Something that popped to my mind that I think would really fit in this story (and I have no idea why); Polyjuice Lemon?