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Write more it's really good

I love this story I look forward to reading more when it comes. :D

awwwww. they;re so cute. i wonder how the WW is going to handle this sudden baby boom. with voldi still lurking it's a bit inopportune timing wise.

I love "weddings"! And I love these couples! I am in the mood for some fluff and this sort of was fluffy, kind of, in a way.

A very fluffy chapter!

just one word[?]...MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
I know, not a word, but expresses my feelings about this chapter...
like this story...oin to the next chapter...

loved this chapter!!! can see my sons...tell them no and that is what they want...remind you of Draco at the end...
now I look at my grandsons and have to laugh at my son...
on to the next chapter...
hehe

Okay, I have spent three days reading this story, so obviously I see its merits. Even though you do tend to get bogged down in the lineages and inheritances, it is a good story and one that I plan on following from this point on. I like how the relationships are growing, even the OOC ones. I even like the Weasley bashing. However, I need to comment on the writing. As an educator, I understand that standards are slipping, but a website like this which is all about encouraging authors should have vetted this story before publishing it online. I don't know why you refuse to get a proofreader but it is yourself that is being hurt by that decision. I hope you find a good editor or Beta or whatever to help you make this story as good as it can be.

Point. It just gets extremely complicated to follow in a text format. I am very appreciative of your attempts regardless, if you feel you need to expound upon it then do so. Its your story. If I want one in a certain way that badly I'll write it myself as is proper among writers, even fanfic writers like us.

This chapter was good. I was not comfortable with what Sirius did to Tonks, but I also understand that she was being unreasonable. It's not like the bonding has to last forever, just long enough so the child is legitimate. I did like the conversation between Snape and Lily. I'm also glad that Severus is going to let Remus love him and let himself love Remus.