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Kinky.... I admit, I really like this - pairing, story, darkness.... It's sexy, hot, with an edge of danger and evil that makes it all the hotter. Y'know what I mean?

As for James, Remus and Peter...well, good luck to them, but I suspect they'll be just a tad later than they maybe mean to be. 'cause Lucius/Sirius is just so hot. ;) :P

Obviously I'm very much enjoying this.

May the words just flow,
Cuzosu

Ooh.... Dark and enthralling, very wonderfully created.... I really need to remember to check up on this more often! But I dropped by today and saw two chapters I hadn't read, so I reviewed them, too. ;)
I'm very much enjoying this story; the darkness of it has a depth to it that most don't, and it's nice to see - not always, but sometimes, y'know? And you're doing so well with it that I'm quite thrilled with how you've adapted my idea to your own style. :) Good job.
Looking forward to reading more!
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu

Ooh.... I like it....
Such a dark start, but ever so lovely.... (I've got quite a soft spot for anything Lucius/Sirius, so I'm ecstatic about the pairing listed. ;D ) I can see you're having fun playing with the vague outline I set up! Not that I'm complaining, of course. ;) Such enthusiasm's contagious; I'm already enthralled!
Tons of promise, could maybe use some minor editing (I'm a grammar/spelling Nazi, sorry, it's nothing against you or the story, and, like I said, it's all minor).
I really enjoy reading stories by authors who can weave a world - and characters - this plausible, and you're doing very well so far with this story. Definitely looking forward to reading more.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu