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for Sex In The Air

by straightlyconfused

person cpetnm
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the indecision of the characters. Romantic confusion at its best! Nice story. :)
schedule February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
okay this story was yummy.it was hot and sexy.
person Mark's Pet
schedule January 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The end, did catch me by surprise. However, I did like the story. The ending with the wild sex in the VIP lounge was great.

I look forward to more stories!?!?!?!
person Joann
schedule December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow...does that mean Hermione is going to be "experimenting" soon?
person Mark's Pet
schedule December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think Hermoine needs to consider the fathers. Lucius would be a dominat lover, while Arthur would be more timid and gentle. Well, at least that is how, I would invision them.

I saw you sneak that little cliffy in there!!!

person ozarkmoon
schedule December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You would really benefit from a beta reader. There are several places where a word is left out, or a wrong word is used (i.e.: around instead of arm).
person Marblemeadow
schedule December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying the start of this story! I'm not entirely sure how to receive updates for a story but if I can figure that out I'll be sure and keep up with your writing. Enjoyed the scene of Draco basically knocking Hermione back to reality. Those short few paragraphs did a lot to explain to me how they ended up "sort of together". Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Joann
schedule December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it already! Please update soon! Thanks for writing!
person Mark's Pet
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You may have been gone; but you didn't lose anything while you were away!!

I love that you get some smut in to catch my attention. But I have a love/hate relationship with the cliffies *grrrr*.

Can't wait for this story to continue. Draco may have to 'step up his game' to keep Hermoine interested.

More, please!!!

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