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for For The Sake Of A Name

by Bickymonster

schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was, admittedly mean of Draco, and uncalled for. First off, a lot of people don't know their best friends middle names. I certainly don't. Second, he wasn't being rude, and as he stated, was trying to understand. That was just, cruel. Especially kicking him out like that, I don't care if Draco told him he could come back, that was uncalled for and I am willing to bet Seri would have a fit if he found out.
person Gruffard
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Huh. First time I am going to comment on anothers review:
Luminari_lilium: i disagree, I totally get Draco's agrey explosion and to be honest I am surprised she has forgiven so easily. She lost her family, being kicked out. Then Sirius comes along and offers a home, hell before she became a Potter she was offerres to be a Black. Which I think very noteworthy.
She picked Orion's name to honor Sirius and then she is accused by the man she is still doesn,t really like of picking a bad name. Asking why she would do that to Sirius. Hell I am surprised she didn't hex him to bits.at this point Sirius is basically one of the most important people in her life after her Husband and Son, and he makes multiple bad comments about Siri like him being childish
person ChaosLady
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was wonderful. Baby Orion is so cute. Draco and Harry's banter is amusing.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was sweet, especially the gifts.
schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I loved the idea of the gifts. Honestly, Ginny needs a permanent attitude adjustment. Or just to be slapped.
person Gruffard
schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The reunion/aniversary was well done. Although I feel like Pansy might have competition for most annoying female at school. I hope that Draco and Harry resolve the issue with Ginny and that doesn't spin too far out of control. I feel like something will go wrong if that is left on the backburner much longer. Especially since it probably been going on since they started dating.

I like how Draco and Harry being a couple is basically accelerating the relationship with Bill and Fleur. Since I think they got married so early in canon because of the war and this will make them catch up in a way. With how the Molly and Ginny interacted with Fleur up to the injury, having Fleur want to babysit might help her with Molly in this version. Fleur is screwed with Ginny, Ginny just wants to hate everyone right now.

Thanks for the fun read, looking forward to next weeks!
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a year already o.o Great chapter. I am glad everyone is getting along!
person delia cerrano
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice "catch up" chapter. I agree with one of the reviews, or was it your reply, that Remus is a more complicated character than people tend to think. Sort of a sad even tragic figure - smarter & more sophisticated than people realize because of his "furry problem" and he has always been so poor (in spite of his rich friends). But don't give him to Tonks PLEASE! I'm still under the influence of a very powerful story of trials of Severus/Remus where Tonks steals him or is trying to from Severus.
person Gruffard
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You saying that Tonks probably won't show makes me sad. :-(

Another solid chapter. I feel like Remus is playing with Fire. But we will see. Especially when it looks like he will be living there. Grr. When will we have news that Lucy is done for? On the Malfoy front, I am really curious about the Cissy's pregancy. Even if Wizard/Witches have kids young. Its not easy. Especially if she used potions that are less then legal to get pregnant. I am worried that will go wrong and not only will Narcissa be devistated, it will only make Lucy attack the Potters harder.

Thanks for the fun read! Looking forward to next week.
person ChaosLady
schedule July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Draco is warming to Remus a little. Excellent update!

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