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by Bickymonster

schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh I love your fic!!! It has me completely entranced! :)

I must admit I'm bit disappointed at Blaise's choice of partner (I hate Ginny with a passion); but for the rest I love this fic :)

Please update soon!
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lmao i loved what draco told snape in class, i can just see the look on snape's face, that was priceless. and things are starting to get more real for the boys, hopefully getting cissa to safety won't be an issue. keep up the great work :D
person Mya Malfoy
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! OMFG!!! THERE'S ONLY 6 CHAPTERS SO FAR!!!

This is now, officially, one of my FAVORITE creature fics! I love the way it started, the way it's going and I can't WAIT to see how you get Narcissa out of Lucius' clutches!!! Hmmmm.... Will there be eventual Severus/Narcissa? Sounds good to me!

Thanks so much for this wonderful story, can't wait for the next update!!
person delia cerrano
schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh good chapter! This is great fun. They are so cute together! Blaise & Ginny? I don't know...What about Hermione? Ron never seems to really be in to her. More like uses her for her brain & doing his homework.
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hm...I like the idea of Blaise and Ginny together. Interesting idea. And Harry ambushing draco all over the castle to snog him is just adorable. I'm glad the kissing is helping him. I'd hate to see them pushed into sex before they were both ready. I look forward to the next one!
person Brandi
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love how you are taking your time in getting Harry and Draco comfortable with each other but still give the the sexual tension that keeps people on the edge of their seats. Keep up the good work and update soon!
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story and I am enjoying it quite a bit. I have a suggestion about Lucius Malfoy, in the books he does finally desert Voldemort during the final battle to find his son. I would suggest using that bit of cannon information when working out how he responds to Draco not doing what Voldemort wants. If you haven't already worked out how Harry's fifth year ended for your story I would suggest you also take some time to work that out. ^_^ It will make thing easier for you and for your readers if you know for sure what did and did not happen for your story verses what happened in cannon. I'm guessing that Lucius was not arrested? As stated before, I'm really enjoying this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wall se is always good for the libido, too bad the boys didn't get to experience it in full. Snape seems to be very accomodating for the boys an dim sure he's very amused at the situation. Kudos to Draco for standing up to his father and coming clean to Harry. Let's hope Sev can save Narcissa and soon.

~~ Meechy
person ChaosLady
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Draco got to choose the right side this time. Excellent update!
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
omgosh I was rolling right along with Blaise! Poor Snape... he has to help Draco but he'd rather be yelling at them and taking house points lol. I especially loved when they both walked out of the classroom with one shoe and sock off. So glad you added this scene :)

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