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by Bickymonster

schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Yes, I did enjoy that scene. The footsie thing was really sweet and cute, and the one after pretty hot for a bit there. ;) Ooooh and some drama with Draco's family!! So much going on; I look forward to more!
person RandomGuy
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I like your story so far, so I wouldn't mind beta'ing it. Mail me at arum@kantara.tv
person Jan
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love Draco ^_~

Please update chapter 6 soon.
person kayla
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't remember if I have reviewed already or not so I'm doing it now just in case. I really love this whole concept; the erotes, their beautiful wings, and all their special abilities.Very awesome and so creative. Loved the make out scene in the Great Hall! I thought the sharing of emotions was so sweet and just plain adorable. I can't wait to see what you have planned for other chapters, and the other characters as well :)
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol awwww. liked watching the teachers trying to be all stern and angry when all of them just wanted to laugh over it. and draco winding harry around his little finger was a trip too. keep up the great work :D
schedule January 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad story but while its all light and fluffy when is the good stuff gonna happen lol cant wait to read more
person deno
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
nyc
gr8 story line/plot
person Nari-Chan
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i love it. u are a brillent writer if i must say my dear bickymonster. and i cant wait to find out more on those plans. i will be eagerly awaiting the next update
person blj.14
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch4 was yummy,ch5 absolutely delicious! That sharing of feelings was a great way to resolve the distance between them. I absolutely love cute,scheming Draco. I'm so glad Draco's friends are being supportive and helpful. Why would Pansy and Blaise's families not want any contact? I thought creature inheritances were mostly common to purebloods. Can't wait for the pregnancy to advance but also want some romance and lemons. How scary is Lucius going to be? LOL Ginny got told off -and I don't think she deserves Blaise.
person ChaosLady
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, for your response to my review! I loved this update and I can't wait for more!

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