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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
aweee what a wonderful christmas they had! how cute (: i cant wait to read more!!
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a great story : ) I can't wait to read your next shot. I appreciate the fact that they are not in love only two hours after the door closed.
Sorry if my english is not the best one, I am not verry skilled in english grammar ^^"
Sorry if my english is not the best one, I am not verry skilled in english grammar ^^"
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is soooo guud! I like where the story is going and it was a clever idea. the only issue i could possibly have is when u refer to them as "the two teens" and saying arse instead of ass. ppl in Brittan say ass more often than not.
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so when are they going to tell Lucius to stuff it? I'd love to see that conversation! :)
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Decorations, Christmas tree, food, presents....yes, it is Christmas! But it's only a start, isn't it? Look forward to reading what more is there for them...
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February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hurray to a great Christmas for the two! Lucius needs to go to hell!
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awee christmas! yay! i hope they get a tree and presents too :)
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I actually feel bad for poor, crazed Harry. lol He is going nuts out there! I am soooooo sorry for Hermione and the loss of her parents. I hope the ones that did it somehow dies horribly painful deaths! And, I LOVED that he comforted her and knew how to just be. I look forward to his first real Christmas. :-) Thank you, HG4eva
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Everyone needs a good cry... especially Hermione. Sorry I didn't review last chapter. I haven't been on the laptop in a while. Really really great chapters. :) Made me all warm and fuzzy inside. :)
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February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A very sweet moment & good thing Harry didn't see it all. ;-) I believe the Room will make sure they have a nice Christmas Day.