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by goldhorse

schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous! Can't wait for the next one. :)
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting idea, looking forward to reading more.
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OOH!!!! This is getting good! And Please don't leave Snape out of this one! We love him so!
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, I WISH I could peek ahead. Waiting is terrible lol. All well, I can't. But, maybe I am psychic with some secret relation to Luna? >.> Who knows lol. Great chapter as always hun. Poor Malfoy. He should have realized Hermione isn't the type to cast a spell at someone for no reason, though I can't blame the boy for being a bit jumpy. Personally, I would like to know why Sev is unhappy, even at the risk of that knowledge making me sad lol. The more written about Sev is always the better ^^ Can't wait to read more as always!
person Kimbovet
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Of course a patronus! Anyway, another great chapter. I'm assuming that as long as they have negative thoughts about each other, the room is not gonna let them out. Also, I would love to hear why Snape's so sad.
person Mark's Pet
schedule January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just the tought of Draco and Hermione, locked in a room together makes me smile. Then all those naughty little images of them doing naughty things just take over!?!?!?

I am so hoping that you too have some naughty plans for our little duo *evil grin*.

More, please.
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
If your muse is telling you to work on this story, then let her! I like the premise and a lot of times you can work out a block on another story by re directing your brain.
schedule January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welcome hun! I do love your stories. Interesting chapter. I like how instead of just fizzling out when the room stopped the spell, Draco had to expend the energy in another way, and the use of elemental magic was a brilliant one. I'm glad he was level headed enough to choose carefully what kind he would use. The effect the dark had in him was an interesting twist as well. I have to wonder if they will attempt a patronus in order to contact Dumbles and let him know they are stuck. At the very least, letting someone know is a good idea. Given that elf magic is different, will the house elves be able to get in there to at the very least, give them food and other things they may need. I doubt at this point the room would let them leave even by elf help lol. Great chapter! Looking forward to more!
person Cat
schedule January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Never thought about how you'd have to expel the dark magic. Good thing he thought it through or they'd have ended up dead. So if the room isn't working right-other than locking, how are they supposed to survive in there long? I fear they'll need a bathroom and food and such. Here's hoping it decides to allow them that much. Why do I have a feeling it can only be fixed when it feels their hatred for each other dissipate-like it can only be "heal" or be fixed when they are able to as well. can't wait for more
schedule January 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, another one from you! How exciting ^^ This sounds interesting. I love how you always leave Sev alive, and make him a vampire XD Interesting twist on letting everyone know. Also, killing off the two most worthless professors of the school in one go? Goodness woman, talk about cleaning house. I can't wait to read more. I have to admit that I think the room isn't working for her because she keeps adding "to avoid malfoy." After something so traumatic happened at the school because of all the hatred and intolerance, one would think the magic itself would rebel against it. Thus, maybe if she omitted the desire to avoid someone she hates, it would respond. Also, I hope Sev isn't always snarly with her...I love how they interact when they get along. I will be looking for more ^^

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