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by goldhorse

person margiere
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You've made me cry! Draco's salutatory speech was absolutely beautiful. I'm going to miss this story so much. Please keep writting stories, you make my breaktime, commute to work and every free moment I can get to myself worthwhile. Thank you!
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dude! That speech had ME tearing up! Thank you for another amazing update. I hope work starts treating you better.
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutely beautiful story. Thank you for sharing.
person Kimbovet
schedule May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a great speech by Draco (with an able assist by Hermione)! I look forward to the epilogue.
schedule May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Unspeakables...I didn't see that coming. I have this feeling that defeating Lucius and the faction was a bit too easy and it's far from over. I certainly hope so, I love the drama. Draco and Hermione are absolutely adorable. I love this.
person Jordan
schedule May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I graduate highschool tomorrow. It is fitting and tearjerking to read this tonight. I am horrified to move on. I have had most of these 230people in my life since first grade and now everything is changing it scares me to death. I hope I will feel like Hermione tomorrow but there's no telling. Sorry for blowing up in your comments...
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHH!!!!!!! By the way, I just have to say it.... You are setting this up for a sequel right now.... Just sayin'..... Anyway.... So glad this was up when I got home. Had three marvelous days off with my boyfriend, but came back to find out I have seven days straight in hell... and it's only getting worse.... So... YES! EXCELLENT WAY TO END THE DAY!!!!!!
person Christopher
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but I have to take issue with the latest chapter. The only way that they could keep a Voldemort from 'happening again' is by killing every single magical and muggle being on the planet. Bottom lining it there.

Dictators are going to rise for whatever reason. If it's not based on 'blood purity', it will be based on religious beliefs or something else. The problem is that until they do something or kill someone, you have NO RIGHT to intervene and if you do? You are more dangerous and a problem than those people are.
person Kimbovet
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie! More! More! More!
schedule May 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. But sad to know that this story is almost at its end. Thank you again for sharing such a wonderful story.

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