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Hi my friend, my other two Harry Potter stories were also posted on HP Fandom but those stories and the archive are being moved to A03. I am going to post Fire and Ice there too once the transfer is complete but wanted to let you know. If you have a problem with it, please let me know. I am still having some health issues and thought trying to get back into writing may help with my recovery. I won't use the chapters you wrote only the ones I did.  I just wanted to let you know about it. I hope you are doing well. Thanks for adopting this story, Ari.

 

Really loving this! I like your twisted mind 😉 some of the time skips were a bit big for my tastes, and I would have liked a short recap of a little bit of what happened, but I do get it. The story must go on and if you wrote out every inconsequential day, the story would be like... Two hundred chapters of mostly fillers. I also noticed your notes about people nagging about short chapters and asking for quick updates: Ignore them! You have a life outside of writing which needs to be lived! That being said, I'm looking forward to reading about Harry's chat with Draco!

Ha haaa first review i write in aff...goodness me :-) t'was a fun little read. Can't wait for the rest.

Uh... That was rather stupid of Ginny. Killing Roger or attempting to would have made more sense rather than leave her kids without one of their parents.

Dude, sorry about this and no offense but this is my notice that I am discontinuing reading your story due to the fact I thought it was a Drarry pairing but now Ginny and Harry are back in love with all of Ginny's whoring past deeds seemingly forgotten.

Hey, your story is missing! Where did it go? What happened? Will you repost it?

I hope Harry doesn't believe that Draco is truly involve with the murders, I can't wait to find out, please update chapter 10 soon ^_^

Dude, I know you adopted this story and am enjoying reading it but could you please make the chapters a little bit longer. It's rather annoying to anticipate an update and the click the new chapter only to find it's an extremely short one again.

hiii, i really like this fan fiction i advise all to read it. it has a excellent plot and lots of twists and at only nine chapters it bound to be fabulous when finished.10/10

you will make Ginny pay for all of her shit with harry and the kids !!!!!!!!!!! Astoria also needs to pay and man don't let Draco get in any more trouble please ....loved this , thanks for the update !!!!!