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I'm so loving this! I usually don't read stories that aren't complete. This story really caught my attention. I love the writing, and the dynamics of the characters. Thank u for keeping Remus and Fred :-) looking forward to reading the next chapter! Hurry! Lol.

This was really good. I love the plot, the sex, the writing and the characters. Will you be updating this?

I just found your story, and I'm so glad I did! I enjoy your style of writing. I find the characters believable, which can hard to do with a fic like this. So good job! :) Also, I love that you brought Remus and Fred back. I can't wait to read more!!

I don't know if you meant to do this on purpose, but everyone seemed a bit out of character. Not by much, but by a noticeable amount. Also, it's good to express some thoughts of the character everyone once in a while, but don't do it so often. As a reader, we can infer and deduce a character's feelings, so there's no need to spell them out completely every time. Don't be afraid to be more descriptive in sex scenes too; it makes it more enjoyable to read. However, I did enjoy the plot; it's not something I've come across before. I also like the idea of students become apprentices, and such. Lastly, I did keep in mind that you had other focuses and things to worry about when writing this.

I really like this story. Love the tension between Hermione and Draco!!

I just found this story and started reading it and thought at first that it was not going anywhere and I was about stop reading it. Then I wanted to give it a chance and I am glad I did. I hope to read more soon.

Good job there. Please continue, cant wait to read what more Hermione will learn ;).

Your story is great honestly. I remember ou saying that you did not think you have enough reviews, to tell you the truth I don't know why either because this is a really good story. And the fact that you update really fast is amazing I love keep doing whatever your doing. I happen to like your Dravo he is full of mystery we don't really know much about him and the reason he does what he does. Love it ;)

I'm loving domineering Draco!

Hi there! Thank you for the response about his actions. And, don't worry. I will most definitely keep reading! Simply delicious, HG4eva