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Just noticed some run ons here and there. One in particular starts at: "Remus had been hesitant...well for Remus while he worked." I love the story line though! And kudos to you for writing this while watching kids; not an easy task!

Hi there. I am reading another story of yours and noticed your name on this one. Good for you for keeping more than one going! I just can't do that. lol I am intrigued by this story, but I can't say I like your Draco at all. He's just mean on principle and I don't get it. Plus, I'm not into guys who hurt women for fun. I think what intrigues me is that Hermione can look at him and not be repulsed. I'm waiting to see more so I can figure out why being scared of a person can in any way be a turn on. I get the "less safe"thing, but I don't get the "cruel, hateful, asshole who physically hurts people" thing. I am hoping for some clarity on that though and I really enjoy your writing, so I will keep reading. :-) Thanks! HG4eva

I just discovered this story. I must say, I am VERY intriqued!?!?!?!

I saw your summary and you got my attention with D/s and M/s. These ALWAYS get my attention. I sense that this story will have all the making of a great BDSM story with LOTS of smut *imagination going wild*.

I can't wait to see what 'bad boy' Draco has planned for 'in the closet submissive' Hermoine!!!!!

I await your next chapter with bated breath (actually heavy breathing)!?!?!?!?!

"we're nowhere near finished yet"... well, look forward to reading more. ;)

I just finished chapter 9 and I must say...you did not dissapoint!!!!

I was waiting for the next chapter and 'poof' it was there. I loved the blindfold to help Hermoine focus on the sensations.

I can't wait for your next chapter and the 'arrangement' *wicked grin*.

More, Please!!!!!!!

Cant wait to read the next chapter ;)! Good job.

Looks like she's going to find out if she really likes him or not!

It took off to a slow start, but I am really starting to like this fic. I'm enjoying the way they interact, and I cannot wait to see further into Draco's head about his view towards Hermione. Best of luck with this!