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February 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I really really really loved this. It was a bit hard to read at first, and that's my only real critique; that the spacing of the paragraphs is a bit extreme, and difficult to view. I absolutely adored the way you describe how she dishevels him, and I find it to be an incredibly sexy theme. I equal parts like that you didn't draw it out uneccesarrily, and feel like there needs to be more.
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March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this. I don't exactly know why, I had never imagined Draco to be anything but the alpha in the relationship but this was enlightening. I really, really liked it. And your writing is very good. Kudos for this!