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You are a really good author the character development that branches so dramatically from JKR's original character set is done brilliantly I am slightly concerned that this story is listed so far from its original, I suppose that simply means you updated this one more resently. I hope you haven't abandoned this story because I am almost stricken with worry for Harry and Draco. While at first skeptical at your slow start into the second installment I am glad that you are taking your time to develop the grief of the supporting characters. Esspecially with how fast the other story was going it needed a breather. I am also leaving a more critical review on the companion piece. (Sorry you're great I just saw some problems in that one.) keep up the good work

I'm glad you explained Severus' pregnancy in more detail. I thought his conversion of magic allowd him simply to become pregnant again not reverse a spell from a pregnancy in stasis. I'm so happy they're having a little boy and a little girl. I'm worried for Draco and Harry because 19 months will seem like a very long time. At the moment Draco is at least in the right frame of mind.

~~ Meechy

I think that their boy should have Severus' coloring and the girl should have Lucius'. Excellent update!

I love this story!!!! Please don't make us wait so long for an update!! 😕

Not bad.

I read the first part yesterday hoping to read more parts of the sequel soon

It's been almost 2 whole months! I'm hoping you'll be updating with a new chapter soon! I know how life can be, butting in to our Harry Potter world. Just wanted you to know there's at least one Potterhead out here that is hoping for this story to be continued!

chap 2...hope another i coming soon, will be checking again...have loved this, don't know if it is Slytherine, or Irish...
Till next time!

Yay! You posted! I have to say this story seems to be turning out pretty good! Keep up the good work and update soon!

and yay for more story! and the fight was very well done. and snape's been infertile because he was already preggers lol nice touch. keep up the good work, i look forward to more :)