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for Peverell's Children

by Zakaira

person ChaosLady
schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely update! I finally got my computer fixed and it's up to speed again! Yay! I can review all I want without my computer freezing!
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think Draco should see harry's sexual images, like Draco buggering him and similar things, along with the images from the book so that it makes him realize that Harry wants to know what to do. On another note I love the story and can't wait for more.
person Sera21
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really cringed at the words " accidentally raped" in the explanation. Please change that. You can't " accidentally rape" somebody. Harry could have pulled out as soon as he noticed Draco was out cold, in fact I find it rather disturbing that he was still hard when his partner was passed out. Accidental rape does not exist and that is an insult to rape victims.
person Diana
schedule March 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person Diana
schedule March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person delia cerrano
schedule March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Doing better. Now if he can just continue courting Draco slowly, Harry should catch him. Draco is a lot more innocent & shy than I would have expected.
person Diana
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter...
Update soon!
person Diana
schedule March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person laceyp
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i hope you update soon i would like to read what happends. i think somthing romantic for their date would be a good thing. maybe Draco will loosen up a little bit and maybe let harry hold him after their dinner and talk about what Draco wants in a courting and in a life partner. maybe that will help Draco trust Harry a little bit more when they are alone together..
person ChaosLady
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry's making progress! Excellent update.

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