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for The Mimicker

by TalisRuadair

person ChaosLady
schedule April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I thought that Sirius was a SUBMISSIVE concubine and REMUS was one of Harry's dominant mates?
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
loved it :D
person i can't help myself
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this story. I was happy to see the cock ring explaintion and was happy you could readbwhat i wrote (auto correct on phones is a prude)

I love where this story seems to be going. Maybe its the fact im a woman, but i love fics with preg and m-preg. However, maybe you could look into doing a little more character based chapters? Especially with these two New mates i personally would like to see more character interaction that dontt only involve delish sex scenes. Not that there's any complaint with thone. I understand your trying to get them all set up and fully harem-ified but maybe a chapter or two to remind us of all the mates and the personalities you're painting? Either way, can't wait for the next chapter.
person reba
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
One part story and one part hot sex scenes. Lovely concept.
I do hope those are all the mates because I am loosing the overview.Meaning it starts getting confusing and boring.
And that would be a shame whith such a hot story.
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the story line, but the continued use of dominate as opposed to dominant when referring to Harry's mates is a bit grating. Not enough to stop me being excited for the story to continue, but something to watch out for.
person D
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Its a really good story! Keep it up.. I can't wait till the next chapter.. please don't take long! Its a breathe of fresh air.. its not like the typical style story.. I really like Dominate Harry..
person jami_lee
schedule March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! Can't wait to read more.
person Brandi
schedule March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats! :) I love the twist you put in this story! Poor Theo, Severus, Sirius, and Reggie- I hope they all have a happy ending after their past childhoods. Keep up the good work and update soon!
person Diana
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person ChaosLady
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was surprisingly good.

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