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July 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 - 4: Love the concept of this story...I think slash and mpreg is fun. Can't wait till Severus & Harry are back together again & Severus knows (not just in a "dream") that Harry is pregnant.
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April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like the story as such, but you seriously need a better beta. For starters, "you're" and "your" are completely different words!
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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's good. Just waiting for Severus & Harry to get together and maybe more of the reactions of Hermione & Ron, Lucius & Draco. Oh what does McGonagal think? She's still alive right? And Molly & Ginny?
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March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-3 a good story but bad english and/or grammer. Will enjoy reading how Severus wakes up and Harry gets together wih him. Snape finding that Harry is pregnant, though apparently he already does in his dream state, should be good also.
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March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this story has lots of promise, its good and will get better as there more chapters written...can't wait!