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I cannot get into this story. I got about half way through chapter three and had to stop. Draco gave birth? Draco breast feeds? Harry almost dies, wakes up, has a small conversation with Draco and decides then and there that they will bond for three years? I know some people enjoy mpreg, but I just can't wrap my head around it. And there is just so much going on in this story I can't keep it straight. Sorry

It's been so long that I can't remember the babies and who had what for Draco and Harry. Can you put a little reminder at the top so I don't have to go back through the whole story please

Are you out there? I keep checking for updates. You have to update because I have to know the rest of the story. Please don'teave us hanging.

I read your replies to my reviews and I'm sorry for saying something about your grammar. I just assumed that you had a great education because I really like your writing. You have some great ideas and fill them out nicely. I do sometimes get confused because you have a lot going on in your stories, but I think you have all of these wonderful thoughts going on about these beloved characters and just have to get them out because they are good it makes a great read. It sometimes get hard to remember who is with who and what they're doing especially when you haven't read for a while and you update. Again, I apologize because I enjoy your work very much. Please keep the updates coming. What will happen with Harry and Draco and the therapist? Why did they name Ginny's daughter with a name so close to hers?

I wrote the last few reviews. I also should have said that it's easy for me to sit here and judge you and that's wrong of me. I don't have any talent for writing and enjoy your work very much. I am looking forward to your update. Keep up the good work.

Your chapter 12, "He's abandoned me for the third time and I don't care to give him a third chance."

Your chapter 18, "Draco said offhandedly as he looked down at his brother." Draco doesn't have a brother.

Is english your first language? Your stories are good, but your grammar is atrocious. If english is your second language then forgive me. If english is your first language maybe you should try reading your writing out loud so you can hear if it sounds correct. You should look up words you are not familiar with. You use the wrong pronoun a lot, for example them when it should be him or him instead of his.

Why would you use Henry? His name is Harry.

Do Orion and Jamie have crab hands? I'm guessing so since their pincers skills are developing.