rate_review Reviews

The premise seems to move along for a first chapter, but why would it take weeks to get to London?

Hey, I just came across this story and I like how you've written it so far. I see you've been bitched to about the characterization you've given Harry and Hermione but I don't think it's too far-fetched and, even if it was, it IS fanfiction as you said. Now, while you said it won't be a smutfic, I hope you won't cast it aside too much, since erotic literature is one of my guilty pleasures and the main reason I wander around this website every once in a while. Nevertheless, the story is going on greatly so far =)

Other than that, I just can say I hope you'll update whenever you can. Have a good day

great story . i look forward to read more soon. please update

almost lost hope in an update but i get that u have RL stuff to deal with. interesting take on the troll scene but y was she in the bath room so long in the first place. i wonder though y u picked chaser, personal i think like wood he would have made a fair beater. all in all good chapter plz keep it up.

Gotta say good story. Its refreshing to get a story that actually has a plot to it and not just smut. Have you considered getting a beta to look over your stories before you submit them. Its a great story just has a few grammer issues. Anyway Update soon. Im loving this story.

it looks like you are going to do the same bash ron story, and gave harry all the girls. i hope not.

Excellent storyline, well thought out, and masterfully constructed. Can not wait for the next installment.

Good story, very good, eloquent even. Smart pacing, believable situations, looking forward to what\where you are going with this.

Apparently that recalled "vibrating broom" toy was more canon than they realized :)

I'm really liking this story so far, I'm not seeing much of the "more perverted" part, but I guess that's why you said "slightly". Keep up the good work, and don't stop the updates.