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for Unwanted Bonds

by CelticKitsune

schedule January 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Like the twists you've added and hope you can continue.
Do work with your beta and maybe even find a second to catch what the first missed.
Though I don't use one, I often wonder how much I've missed in my stories.
One note for you: In chapter fifteen, you refer to Draco as the blondee, not the blond.
This is probably just a typo, and a simple fix.
Many people ignore the male and female forms of blonde and brunette, but I find them distracting if used improperly.
Keep working, don't worry about slow chapter updates. Those who like your work will wait.
You're faster with them than I am.

I'll be reading, Bob
schedule November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy I found this story again :) I really love how its all progressing. And I'm making sure I bookmark it this time ;) Cant wait for more.
person magentah
schedule November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love how patient Narcissa is with Harry! Just what he needs. This was a lovely update! I found myself grinning with each passing look and blush between the boys and am really looking forward to seeing what their relationship grows into. Thanks for sticking with this story--it's one of my favorites! :)
person Shadow
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love Cissa. She is one of my favorite characters from canon. I loved her mainly because of her strength. Yes she had the evil git in her home but she showed that as a mother she was unafraid of doing anything to protect her son. Even if it meant lying to Voldemort and saving Harry. So go Cissa :)
person staar
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really good here !!!!!!! new reader and can't wait for the next update !!!!!!
schedule July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was a freaking wonderful update! I can't wait to see what happens next in the story :)
person Naughty_megs
schedule July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really loving this story! Can't wait to read more!
person HEARTSTAR
schedule July 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yay thank you foe the update and now harry has to tell what happens a at the durs I look forward to the following chapter ty again.
person Cathy
schedule July 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please update the story.
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter :)

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